SerPounce 2011-03-06 02:13:02

I hope all of your submissions get blammed.

Sam1234299 2011-03-06 13:55:33

^ I'll address that.

Your last submission, "This Is The Future," was horrendous. It lacked obvious voice acting, (since both voices sounded the same.) It had no point, and the animation was bad.

The voices sound bland, and hard to hear. You mumbled, and you were mostly incomprehensible at best. You either need to get a better microphone, or speak louder.

It lacked a plot. Why was it "The Future?" It was about a guy getting hit by a car. Totally off-base with the title. Also, Who was talking to the person walking? Jesus? You? You have to point it out.

Your animation style was bad. The person's neck grew every time he moved. It was really choppy, but you could fix that by upping the frame-rate. Also, I know you might not be able to help this, but your art is really bad. You should take some art lessons, and you might get better. Then again, you might not.

I'm not trying to be a dick about this, but I'm just trying to be blunt as possible. Don't take this as an attack, but as constructive-criticism.